Fireworks should be banned.
Fireworks should be banned and not to be used.
3 reasons why we should not use fireworks.
3 reasons why we should not use fireworks.
Reason 1: Fireworks scary animals because fireworks are loud and
when they bang the animals will get startled. In some cases animals
will run around by the noise of the fireworks.
when they bang the animals will get startled. In some cases animals
will run around by the noise of the fireworks.
Reason 2:When a firework goes off the noise can make it hard to
sleep for some people and because people can set them off all year
round at night when people are trying to sleep.
sleep for some people and because people can set them off all year
round at night when people are trying to sleep.
Reason 3: Fireworks can because they can be super dangerous.
Fireworks can be dangerous because fireworks can start a fire
and if a firework hits you that you can die or get severe injuries.
This is because they are explosives.
Fireworks can be dangerous because fireworks can start a fire
and if a firework hits you that you can die or get severe injuries.
This is because they are explosives.
Now you can see why fireworks should be banned for these reasons
and more. They can take a life.
and more. They can take a life.
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ReplyDeleteHi Bronte, it's me Eunize.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you picked this topic and I like the way you included for examples in your persuasive writing. At my old school we did only a little bit of persuasive writing. Did you know that you could add some linking words in your writing? Did you have any ideas before making this?
Great job!!