I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 5 September 2019
This is my reading for week 7 term 4.
Niggles: T 3 W 5
By Bronte:
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Mr and Mrs Fitz, Suzie Long.
The issue is that Mr and Mrs Fitz have too many hens.
The hens drop feathers.
The feathers scatter all over the backyard. On windy days the feathers blow down into the backyards of other people’s. Suzie is constantly raking up feathers.
Hen poop
The smell of the poop. The poop smell get everywhere.
Hens clucking:
Suzie finds the constant clucking of the Fitz’s hens. Sometimes the noise is so loud, Suzie can’t even hear the television.
Suzie Long wants Mr and Mrs Fitz to move with their hens to the country.
Suzie like to keep her house very very tid.
Suzie means that it is hard to escape the hens.
Why does suzie Long complaining about the hens clucking: Because the hens clucking can get very annoying.
How many hens does the Fitz have: The fitz have over one hundred hens.
Can you plz give me some fed back. .
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