Reading

This is my hockey stick that I made for my reading this week. 

Improve the sentence

Improve the sentence
The tremendous ship embark majestically until the preposterous captain steered into a colossal, hulking  tsunami and everyone kicked the bucket.

Who am I?

Who am I?

• I can live for a week without my head.
• I have 6 legs.
• I have a hard Exoskeleton.
• I have been in the world for over 300 million year.
• I are tied for the fastest insect with the  Australian tiger beetle.
• I can live without food for a month.

Who am I?

What am I?

I’m a teal color and I also have black feathers and I’m petty nice shine to me. I have a little fluffy place under my head, and am also found in NZ.

Can you get what I am?

This is my reading for week 7 term 4. Niggles: T 3 W 5 By Bronte: _______________________________________________ Mr and Mrs Fitz, Suzie Long. The issue is that Mr and Mrs Fitz have too many hens. The hens drop feathers. The feathers scatter all over the backyard. On windy days the feathers blow down into the backyards of other people’s. Suzie is constantly raking up feathers. Hen poop The smell of the poop. The poop smell get everywhere. Hens clucking: Suzie finds the constant clucking of the Fitz’s hens. Sometimes the noise is so loud, Suzie can’t even hear the television. Suzie Long wants Mr and Mrs Fitz to move with their hens to the country. Suzie like to keep her house very very tid. Suzie means that it is hard to escape the hens. Why does suzie Long complaining about the hens clucking: Because the hens clucking can get very annoying. How many hens does the Fitz have: The fitz have over one hundred hens. Can you plz give me some fed back. .

Niggle

This i my 2nd niggle for my reading work. Can you plz tell me some things I should add next time.

Niggles

In reading for term 3, my group looked at a story called niggles. 
Can I have some feedback...

Fireworks should be banned

Fireworks should be banned.

Fireworks should be banned and not to be used.
3 reasons why we should not use fireworks. 

Reason 1: Fireworks scary animals because fireworks are loud and
when they bang the animals  will get startled. In some cases animals
will run around by the noise of the fireworks.

Reason 2:When a firework goes off the noise can make it hard to
sleep for some people and because people can set them off all year
round at night when people are trying to sleep.

Reason 3: Fireworks can because they can be super dangerous.
Fireworks can be dangerous because fireworks can start a fire
and if a firework hits you that you can die or get severe injuries.
This is because they are explosives.

Now you can see why fireworks should be banned for these reasons
and more. They can take a life.

We should no always use animals.

We should not always use animals.

In my opinion we should not always use animals to work
because animals should be free and not working
against their will. 3 reasons why we should not use animals.

Reason 1: At sea world you are able to see beluga whales but beluga
whales live in the Arctic Ocean. Beluga whales live in an area that is
84 degrees Fahrenheit/29 Celsius. Do you think that Sea World and
especially sea world in Africa can make that same environment like
the Arctic Ocean? 

Reason 2: Horse racing is bad because horse racing is about
gambling. The Horse racers hit the horse to make them go faster.
This is when horse racing gets really bad because if a horse gets
a broken leg they shot the horse only because it’s very difficult for
the broken leg of a horse to heal correctly. Also some people give
horses drugs to make them run faster but it is illegal and also it is
bad for the horse.

Reason 3: Some people use elephants to lift logs in  Asia because
elephants can lift heavy things with their trunks but that is bad
because elephants can get hurt. It is also mean because animals
should live freely and not use to lift logs and other heavy stuff.

So for all of these reasons and more people using animals 
should be banned. Animals should be free and live happy and not
being used by people.